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Contributed by
urbanchinchilla
on
Saturday, 3rd May 2008 @ 12:10:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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His manner is grander and open
It flows in and flows out
Like his verbal self
Himself verbalised
Mutating, purging himself hollow
Effervescent untruths
The patter
Language and the use of it
Spinning and webbing
Until his audience are meshed
And he is threadbare
Barren of understanding and emotion,
His words are out
Momentarily knotting its prey
Then slivering away and leaving a husk
But his prey are free
And he is gone
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2008-05-03 00:10:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sold
(User Rating: 1 ) by safetyinnumbers on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 12:09:20 AM AEST (User
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Hi, Nice use of words in this poem. Good work. |
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