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Love, Life and Liquor
Contributed by
Vic
on
Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 02:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Like the froth in a mug of beer,
Like ice cubes in whisky on the rocks.
When you're drunk there’s no factor of fear,
My name drifts away even before anyone ‘bout it talks.
I’ve never been to anyone as hard as rum,
Never have I stunk as pungent as grog.
People don’t know the tribulations I’ve overcome,
I’ve never been as cunning as a fox or as slimy as a frog.
Sometimes I remain like vodka lost and unknown,
Sometimes like a cocktail vivid and bright.
Sometimes I’m like tequila which leaves grown men blown,
I’ve done every possible drink, trying to sleep through the night.
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Vic
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2008-05-02 14:45:33]
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Re: Love, Life and Liquor
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 04:19:42 PM AEST
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| well written..this cud as well b an ad for a pub hehe lol!!!no offence!! |
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Re: Love, Life and Liquor
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by brew on
Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 12:46:03 PM AEST
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Cool analogies.........May I have one.? Good write
brew~! |
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Re: Love, Life and Liquor
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 04:34:20 PM AEST
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Very humble write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Love, Life and Liquor
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by 3660Days on
Tuesday, 30th December 2008 @ 07:10:53 AM AEST
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| I think the concept is very very good, but it lost me with what looks like forced rhyme in lines 4, 8, and to a lesser extent, 12. Other than that, very good. |
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