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By Way of My Apology
Contributed by
ucka
on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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By Way of My Apology
As I leave the valley of my youth
With the sharpened daggers
Of my tongue and pride
I plainly see the melody of ways
I have learned to kill and wound
If I would have come to you
With my hands open but not out
Or wrap you in my arms
And known that that was more than enough
If I could have heard your heart sing
When they played your favorite song
Or heard you plea
The times I said goodbye
If I would have known how lost I left you
When I left to find myself
Or dared to enjoy the peace
That my rest could give to you
If I could have felt how much it hurt you
To see my body broken
Then I should have wept
At the drop of those single tears from you
And If I would have known the losses
From all the battles I refused to lose
Then I would have lived
What has taken years to see
And come to different terms
By way of my apology…
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ucka
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2003-03-13 08:00:00]
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Re: By Way of My Apology
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by riverofwords on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 09:18:24 AM AEST
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what a unique way to apologise and a very unique write
i loved the imagery that was conjured up
well done
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: By Way of My Apology
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by kolbrun on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:08:57 PM AEST
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This is pretty! Sad, but touching...and sweet. Very sweet
yours Kolbrun |
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Re: By Way of My Apology
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by razorbladerose on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 09:25:15 AM AEST
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| This is one of my favorite writes on this site! I truly loved it, it is so touching , it's beautiful! |
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Re: By Way of My Apology
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by Merry on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 10:57:40 AM AEST
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ucka - your writing always leaves me in awe. Brilliant insights into the human experience. Your writing touches me deeply.
merry |
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