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A bleeding shadow
Contributed by
safetyinnumbers
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Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:41:53 PM in AEST
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I am a passionless and loveless soul
with no will or argument anymore
it has all been taken away
all to dissolve and fade
I am but a faint copy of myself
a shadow that walks and breathes
my dreams are cheap
I sold them to the highest bidder
and now my dreams no more
sold again and again
I am deleted and defeated
unwilling to dream or believe
I am but a bleeding shadow
that bleeds of hope and dreams.
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2008-05-01 21:41:53]
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Re: A bleeding shadow
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 07:50:40 AM AEST
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Wow...there is so much in these few lines that I can identify with at this point in my life.. Good write.... Hope it gets better for you...
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Re: A bleeding shadow
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by Arijadna77 on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 07:30:06 AM AEST
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Shadows...where ever we go,they follow...and if we bleed,they will too...like a mirror to our faces...cant avoid,just except...
Love the way you wrote it... |
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Re: A bleeding shadow
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 04:44:26 AM AEST
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