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The Weight of Love

Contributed by ucka on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The weight of love presses on the shoulders
And causes tentative steps,
the pawing of the ground, with toe, before you ask-
the weight of love pushes a gaze to the ground
and buries words
but perhaps the words aren’t needed

Love is such a simple thought pattern

It merely is-everything-two fold.
You are
And I will give

But what is everything, but mass
And mass a strange state
Of electricity and everything
Either on or off
Existing in things that don’t exist

And electricity a hum, a buzz, a pulse
Love is now a pulse
Your pulse
my pulse

A pulse increased by the very thing that weighs us down

The weight of a hand to a cheek
The gentle convergence
A trembling kiss
Fingers softly intertwined
A fleshy mosaic, a pattern
A shared burden of expression

Expression is the weight of love…




Copyright © ucka ... [ 2003-03-13 07:00:00]
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Re: The Weight of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 12:13:16 PM AEST
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this is truly beautiful - abstract moments contrasted with realism. 'expression is the weight of love' - a philosophical gem. hope to read more of your work, Kate x


Re: The Weight of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by northcoast on Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 07:59:22 PM AEST
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I have to thank tease_whizz for a good review of a beautiful poem. I read it too quickly the first time through and failed to see the concrete images. Her insight made me read it again, more slowly and with imagination. The pictures here are so perceptively familiar, without being cliche, that they locate the more abstract description and allow it to bear meaning that is unrestricted but not inchoate.


Re: The Weight of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by kolbrun on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:10:48 PM AEST
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Expression is the weight of love?beautiful ending... good write


Re: The Weight of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by razorbladerose on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 09:27:44 AM AEST
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Brilliant! You have a way of expression that really makes the reader think, which is so interesting! Please...keep writing and submiting! ;-)


Re: The Weight of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:32:07 PM AEST
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ucka - I like your style - this is lovely -tender - tenuous - universal - very well written

merry




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