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Vision of the Mist
Contributed by
UnknownLegend
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Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:40:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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She walks thru' the mist as the wind in the trees
My eyes cannot see , is she vision or dream
to meet me at dusk she appears in my mind
the essence of spirit, no concept of time
she comes gently to me, this time every night
our hands almost touch. too soon gone from sight
I live just to see her, my eyes they do strain
she's gone way too soon, like a songs last refrain
How can I be taken, by this creature of light
so oft' have I known her, in her garment of white
it falls to the floor, a feather at her feet
exposed from the mist, I now feel the heat
I walk slowly to her, her shoulders now bare
caress her so gently, my hands thru' her hair
Thru this moment become, as one with the night
hoping and praying, the sun lose it's light
but this blanket of mist cannot last forever
The sun takes her from me, to hold maybe never
I wait for that dream, same time every night
My eyes slowly open, of this vision lose sight
I hold to the darkness, and wait for the mist
Too soon is the dawn, we share one last kiss
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Re: Vision of the Mist
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:45:15 AM AEST
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I am truly in awe with this write.
Your talent is shining once more.
huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Vision of the Mist
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by doug on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:53:44 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this. I rarely comment on
poems here anymore.. not that I'm some
great poet myself.. it's just that I look for that
certain feeling from a poem and I've not felt
it from many here lately. You have captured it though. That feeling of mysticism. I love it.
great work , truly , doug |
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Re: Vision of the Mist
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:27:10 AM AEST
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Amazing write. I really enjoyed reading this....
Jenni |
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Re: Vision of the Mist
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:54:16 PM AEST
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Nice write.
Excellent content.
~Stephan |
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Re: Vision of the Mist
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 04:55:57 PM AEST
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this is exquisite- precise and polished,
beautifully romantic and flawless:)
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->--
*roses at your feet |
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