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Crosses Worn Like Daggers
Contributed by
doug
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Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:26:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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'Round the church yard tombs
sat the coiled serpents
smoking cigarettes...and giggling all the while
cold angel statues weeping in the distant mist
watching whilst the serpents crawl
with wings of burning fire
Their little catholic mini-skirts
hardly hide the pentagrams
tattooed like a black scar 'pon the milky thighs...
numbers of the beast..are born upon the right hand
crosses worn like daggers
when the crucible is nigh
their hellish throes of laughter
do not thrive or echo here
but soak instead into the deadened
silence of the tombs
and when the moons creeping through
the dying trees you'll find them here
waiting for their lord again
for He is coming soon
smoke a cigarette and giggle
He is coming soon
burning wings of fire
O' ...He is coming soon
crosses worn like daggers
underneath a bloody moon
smoke your cigarettes 'n' giggle
He is coming soon
Copyright ©
doug
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2008-05-01 09:26:43]
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Re: Crosses Worn Like Daggers
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:37:52 AM AEST
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| I like this write a lot and all the symbolism you used I liked this write a lot keep writing great poems |
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Re: Crosses Worn Like Daggers
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by Zork on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 09:53:51 AM AEST
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| Sounds like a good death metal song |
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Re: Crosses Worn Like Daggers
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:25:44 AM AEST
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| ...what an awesome write! I dont know what it was about this, but I think the atmosphere was well done and the storytelling kept me interested throughout. It sounded very unique, and was told quite well. An interesting post you have here, well done. |
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Re: Crosses Worn Like Daggers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:46:42 PM AEST
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doug .. your author's note is perfect! Definitely something wicked!!
The descriptions and setting you've created are undeniably eerie. A perfect
blend of darkness and intrigue. Exactly how and where I would expect the
antichrist to appear. Exceptional usage of the language, doug. You do dark
writes a great justice! :)
~Breezy
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Re: Crosses Worn Like Daggers
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by True on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 10:49:50 PM AEST
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| very eerie and wicked, reminds me of a horror film. As always I love your writes, glad to see a new one. |
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