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Dream
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 08:51:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My mind is muttering your name in a whisper.
Anxiousness awaits inside as softly, as we daze within eachothers' eyes.
My lips chattering together, aching for your's to press against them just once.
Enabling the passion you bare inside.
Maybe tonight you'll be come conscious to my feelings, you'll let me press my head against you, and you'll hold me close to your chest.
And maybe your cold, confused heart will beat for me, just once.
Our fingers will find the place their suppose to be; and this hell will die away.
Your arms, once pushing me away, will endure me forever.
My obsession will not drag on, you'll conquer it.
Whispering sweet melodies in my ear, as if some confusion became of her and I.
Fascination on your every movement; if I told you would you enable your love for me, or would it destroy all I have dreamed up inside.
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2008-04-30 20:51:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:47:39 PM AEST (User
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What a write! There is torment in here that is so beautifully captured!
So many incredible lines that take the heart and squeeze out all the emotion it
can hold. Love, passion, desire.. they hold a certain magic that one cannot deny.
Especially when bewitched such as this. Magnificent piece!
~Breezy
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