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Vanquilitrist Tears
Contributed by
amber_vonHorror
on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 08:05:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Oh, the strings that puppetted her heart
They just kind of forgot to move
And she kind of fell
Like a Vanquilitrist doll
And the crowd
They took their photos
The flashes blinding her
Her skin so fair
A face carved to slain perfection
But one tear drop. Fell.
Shes so lost!
No sleeping pills will save her now
As she falls further down
Glassed over icy blues.
He moves his hand away
She slumps.
The drugs die.
He realizes she really was never alive.
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Re: Vanquilitrist Tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by BornReckless on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 04:48:52 AM AEST
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| Is the doll on drugs? Or is he on drugs?...Or are you on drugs?? Either way it was an interesting poem. |
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Re: Vanquilitrist Tears
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by Anesthetic on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 08:12:59 AM AEST
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Thought provoking, its hard to tell just what the true story is here it was well sheilded. I enjoyed this write alot.
Keep up the good work
~Charli~ |
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