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Can of Worms
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 08:16:19 AM in AEST
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Can of Worms
I know they opened a can of worms
The biggest one seems to laugh as it squirms
Too many people see the worms as trouble
When it is a whole can it appears to be double
Think this through and hear what I say
They may be working to save a future day
They stir their way through all the dirt and mud slung ‘round
Making sure it all gets mixed thorough in the ground
What is magic is what comes out in the end
Soil that is richer and much better from the blend
A new place for which to plant the seed to grow
This is the outcome for which I want you to know
Let the worms do as they must
Keep your head high above all the dust
At the end may your days be happy once more
Let your friends help you, that’s what they’re for
Deadwriter
04/29/2008
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Re: Can of Worms
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:50:14 AM AEST
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Thank you for this. It melted my heart. So very beautiful.
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Re: Can of Worms
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:59:21 AM AEST
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I am glad you could be there for a friend in need. Good write.
Jenni |
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Re: Can of Worms
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by soapy on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 07:23:15 PM AEST
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| Most unusual topic well written and it gives a message to the reader. Without worms this world would be in a more desparate way than it is. soapy. |
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Re: Can of Worms
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 01:33:24 PM AEST
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| wow nice job....I like the analogy of the worms it really brings it to life......=D |
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Re: Can of Worms
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by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:34:28 AM AEST
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| This was really nice, I've always liked worms, I save them every time it rains by putting them back in the grass and off the sidewalk :) I really enjoyed this. Good write. |
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