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- My Little Wonder -
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Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:33:39 AM in AEST
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My little wonder oh how you are
My little wonder oh joys never to far
How you run to me and then away
As I watch the Sun bloom up and away....
My little wonder as far as can be
My whole heart reaches out with such glee
For your kiss and hugs only ment for me
How I love your touch from you to thee....
My little wonder I love you now
My little wonder it'll work somehow
About how we grow and how we see
Cherishing our times just you and me....
My little wonder I wanted to say
How I truely enjoy forever this way
For when you hold and love so close
Your the little ones I love the most....
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Re: - My Little Wonder -
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by catz77 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:44:11 AM AEST
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Aw this was cute and the reason why you wrote this is admirable, but poetically I think it might need some improvements in flow. An enjoyable read, however. ^_^
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Re: - My Little Wonder -
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 03:17:39 PM AEST
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Sweet and beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: - My Little Wonder -
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by julianasmommy on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 10:44:42 AM AEST
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| LOVE IT! It's so simple and easy to understand and yet so full of love for your kids. Absolutly love it hun. Great job! |
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Re: - My Little Wonder -
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by Starchild7 on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 07:45:29 PM AEST
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Aww, this was really beautiful and so full of love for your children they must feel so loved.
With love and light Starchild |
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