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Warrior’s Demise
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deadwriter
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Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 10:59:29 AM in AEST
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Warrior’s Demise
I was born to be a warrior. It is in my family’s blood
We have all been valiant warriors since the great flood
I worked and trained every day of my young life
Choosing to trust in my sword and never taking a wife
Many times having to protect the ground on which I stand
I could not even count the scores that have died by my hand
Harboring no fear from the massive armies that were faced
Instead, worshiping the strength with which I had been graced
Seeking to devastate anything that dare cross my path
One night I was destroyed as I soaked in my bath
A lovely maiden with whom I had physical pleasure and great joy
Informed me she was with child. My baby girl or a boy
Of all the battles and the foes I had in my lifetime to defeat
Who would have ever though I had been turned soft by hearing a baby’s heartbeat?
Deadwriter
04/28/2008
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Re: Warrior’s Demise
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:30:37 AM AEST
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Awww what a surprise ending!! I loved this.... it's amazing the change a baby could bring in a man..or woman.....
Hugs..
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Re: Warrior’s Demise
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 01:02:50 PM AEST
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This entire write just brought me right in then the ending just melted me made me say awwwww..
Michelle |
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Re: Warrior’s Demise
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by breathofrane on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 01:43:22 PM AEST
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| That is so sweet! I love how there is such a quick little twist at the end. |
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Re: Warrior’s Demise
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by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 09:22:57 PM AEST
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Hey Deadwriter,
That was neat. I liked the ending...you old softy...lol
Good writing.
~Stephan |
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Re: Warrior’s Demise
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by soapy on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 12:13:17 AM AEST
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| Great poem with an unusual ending. Soapy. |
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Re: Warrior’s Demise
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 08:27:41 PM AEST
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beautifully written, i love the ending; it warmed my heart:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Warrior’s Demise
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by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:41:19 AM AEST
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| I really liked this a lot, very sweet. :) |
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