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these eyes
Contributed by
nightrider
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Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Look into these eyes,
Tell me what do you see,
I see a broken child staring back at me,
No longer allowed to laugh or play,
She’s a shackled child,
Chained to her pain,
She cant run or have fun,
Its no longer an option,
All day long,
She just trudges along,
Her invisible chains weighing her down,
No one can see them,
Yet everyone can,
her soul is so tired,
her will is so meek,
she only wishes to live through the week.
She wishes for a friend to call,
She longs for a loving touch,
She wishes that she had a friend,
Someone who really cared,
Whether she lives or whether she dies,
Can’t anyone read her eyes?
Why am I the only one to see,
These hidden secrets inside of her?
As I look closer,
Deeper inside,
I realize that the reflection,
Is only mine.
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nightrider
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Re: these eyes
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by ap on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 04:25:32 AM AEST
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to know who, wat n where u r... sense not urself in light and sound (thats perception) look into darkness... listen to silence... n ull find that in the absense of all sound and light.,.. thats a true reflection... of urself init so much clearer?
in the eyes u find a reflection of u... cuz the eyes r too deep, too dark, too silent...
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Re: these eyes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:54:46 AM AEST
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wasn't expecting an ending like that but.. it was really good and the ending made it all the better...
~Crystal~ |
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Re: these eyes
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 04:57:40 PM AEST
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This is a brilliant poem - it really moved me.
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Re: these eyes
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:20:18 PM AEST
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| Such an amazing write. *S* Cynthia |
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