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~When the hearts involved~
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:53:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Oh this heart of mine
how it feels every ounce.
Emotion turning over
emotion over time.
Depth of the feeling
doesn't matter what.
Feel it to the very core
no end no start.
Just how it is.
Ticking deep inside.
Emotions trailing round
feelings just wont hide.
Tuck them beneath the pillow.
Sleep this night wont come.
Hollow world round
nowhere to just run.
When the hearts involved
there is no answer to why
it comes as it comes
it flows then passes by.
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shelby
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:59:07 PM AEST
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When the hearts involved
there is no answer to why
it comes as it comes
it flows then passes by.
Good writing,
Very wise you are.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by jesusofholland on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 05:07:20 PM AEST
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| Hang tough! Emotion is a fickle growth, but it will abide with time. Writing is what gets us through these trying times. |
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by sride686 on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 08:44:41 PM AEST
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| What to say except this is a good write my heart and mind gets so overwhelmed with emotions in this place that many nights I lay awake and feel lost in this place. They say that time will heal but is that true or is it lies we tell ourselves to just get us through. Take care….Steve |
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 09:04:22 PM AEST
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Who knows how the heart works!!! I dont!
Good piece.....
Jenni |
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by needledancing on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 10:22:18 PM AEST
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Life is surely about living out our emotions. It is such a torturous endeavour sometimes...yet to be of no feeling would trully be an empty life indeed.
You have written wonderfully about being "IN FEELING" |
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by funnyface09 on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 11:56:41 PM AEST
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i miss your writing...thanks for sharing this very emotional piece on feelings and hearts...
where hearts involved,there is really no answer..i trully relate to this...
i found that through time,everything really pass by and flows through it..
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by angel_blue on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 12:05:55 AM AEST
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| now THIS I'll remember when I'm feeling every ounce...thank you for sharing |
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by Vic on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 08:29:49 AM AEST
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Just beautiful.
love and peace |
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Re: ~When the hearts involved~
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 09:26:49 AM AEST
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| The heart is very complex, as are emotions. You wrote about them so well. I feel so therefore I am, I laugh and cry, for emotions say I can. Lovely write. Sue x |
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