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Life's spring
Contributed by
holy
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Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:06:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Life's spring
After dinner
you became a positive speaker
You told me that you were enjoying your life's spring
Your facility in language was surprising
I thought it was natural for a bird to fly
you were like a naughty boy in my eyes
The restaurant was a short walk from my home
we walked and talked to enjoy our time
you said that you would have a nice sleep
because you finally became quiet and would never feel woful
"Thank you for coming
you are too kind a girl to refuse
all your words is above price."
we were shoulder and shoulder
I was a little afraid to take your hand
You told me you really felt much better
after the day you would be quieter and quieter
and you believed your future would be hoper and hoper
After a long long walk
I was slightly tired
After reture to my home
I wish I had a sweet dream
when I lay on my bed
suddenly felt I was not sleepy
everything with you was showing before of my eyes
instantly I got up and wrote down all the piece of our stories
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Re: Life's spring
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by holy on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:23:43 PM AEST
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After reture to my home
After returned to my home |
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Re: Life's spring
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:46:07 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write very much thanks for sharing.
Michelle |
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