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Based On History (He's No Me)
Contributed by
Beau2163
on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 02:34:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Does he lick your lips with the tip of his tongue?
does he kiss your ears like me?
does he do all the different things you said you loved, disregarding it's obscurity?
Does he get your jokes, your innuendos, would he even care to know?
Does he appreciate your flaws? ones you were never afraid to show.
You were imperfectly perfect.
Sweatpants, devoid of make-up
t-shirts that didnt complement your body
oh but when you smiled and touched your face..
palm of your hand holding your chin
smiling with a purpose
my hand is privileged to graze your skin
But he's not man enough to notice your mannerisms
your tendancies
your assortments of laughs and smiles
all he has on me
is history
... to you is that worthwhile?
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Beau2163
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2008-04-28 14:34:50]
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Re: Based On History (He's No Me)
(User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 03:33:35 PM AEST
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| That's so sad man. I really feel for you. I enjoyed this poem because I can truly relate to losing a love then seeing her with an ex. Good work, and I hope you can let this pass, and realize that she is not worthwhile. |
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Re: Based On History (He's No Me)
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 09:29:26 AM AEST
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Such a sad situation, for you. I can feel the hurt in this..and a bit of anger... It's her loss I guess, and maybe she will realise it sooner or later. Overall, a good write...
Jenni |
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