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A Night Spent Drowning Pain
Contributed by
poetic_punk
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Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 08:32:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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As I watch this bottle drain I see my glass fill up
And as it seems I have less wine I empty another cup
This poison running through my veins makes my vision blured
As i struggle to control my limbs I find my words are slured
It's just another night that has been spent on drowning pain
The more I drink the more I'm numbed and closer to being sane
This is my life, this is my time and on the inside i am dieing
For when I smile at you, deep inside I know that I am lieing
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Re: A Night Spent Drowning Pain
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 09:49:00 AM AEST
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I like this - It damn sure makes sense.
You too, are an amazng writer.
Good work.
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Re: A Night Spent Drowning Pain
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 11:40:41 AM AEST
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I am glad to see that word, "former" in the opening lines.... Good write... I know the feeling, only I am facing another kind of demon....
Jenni |
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