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Release
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 08:33:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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just skin away the ego
leave little of myself
take away the longing
and put it on a shelf
strip me down to moments
burn memories on the pyre
love and loss and loneliness
throw all onto the fire.
Copyright ©
spike
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2008-04-27 20:33:00]
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Re: Release
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:41:28 PM AEST
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My dear friend, Spike,
What power in such a short little piece. In here you have captured something I've felt more times than I truly care
to think on. How glorious to burn the ego's absurd and nagging qualities, to awaken fresh with new perspective.
Can this be done? Can we let go of primitive instinct, to allow a more calm and serene essence to wash over us?
What is it we humans need exactly? We all rush around day after day in search of what it is that will fulfill, satisfy
and make us complete. Do we ever fully know what that is? Thanks for this, poet. It has created a wealth
of pondering within me.
Exemplary. Rich with depth and insight. (As usual)
^_^
~B |
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Re: Release
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:53:05 PM AEST
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
Spike - This is amazing, when I started reading it , the flow from the tongue was so smooth.
The content itself fantastic and extremely powerful. I wish I could have written something like that.
Outstanding - kudos to you.
Keep em coming.
Stephan |
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Re: Release
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by Arijadna77 on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 11:42:48 PM AEST
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| less words,greater poem:) |
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Re: Release
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 10:47:06 AM AEST
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Such a powerful write... At the moment, I wish I had that calming peace within me.... Great piece, Spike...
Jenni |
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Re: Release
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 03:04:20 PM AEST
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Awesome graphics and awesome write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Release
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 05:05:24 PM AEST
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Incredible write and the pic fit with it perfectly.
Michelle |
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Re: Release
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by crazy on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 01:51:00 AM AEST
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| wow what an amazing write. i agree with burning it all....emotions suck |
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Re: Release
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by safetyinnumbers on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 12:25:28 AM AEST
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I like how you left a space between each line, creates a nice mood....very good work....peaceful.... |
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Re: Release
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by elle on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 12:18:13 AM AEST
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| simply splendid. . . I am feeling this. . . peace. elle |
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