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Silent
Contributed by
shelby
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Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 12:48:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Silence late night whispers of wind through the tree's.
Day has run down darkness welcoming patter of the rain.
Times such as these the moments are golden
precious and precise opportunity to unravel the day.
Then there is the silent.....
Not a word or a reply, punishing with neglect
words gone astray, diminishing on winds
barren such barren could be compared with the desert
where everything lovely slowly withers away......
Glow of first light after the dark
sun begins to rise and overcome nights gown.
No hustle on the streets or cars passing by
not yet, maybe only the song of early rising birds
This is refreshing, soul awakening moments.
Brief note or reply, yet there is none.
Silence is not golden
hurting hearts making souls come undone.
Loving the silence but not the silent.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-04-27 12:48:57]
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Re: Silent
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 01:17:44 PM AEST
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Wow, grrlfriend..this is amazing.... I wish I could write like this...
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Re: Silent
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by akakin on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 04:29:14 PM AEST
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| like the play on wurds. |
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Re: Silent
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by soapy on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 05:05:53 PM AEST
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| Silence can refresh or kill a soul. How true! Silence is sometimes golden and a blessing, think of the teacher with a headache and the school children that sit and fidget, making that soft noise that is very distracting and disturbing to the one with the aching head. Now there silence would indeed be golden. What of the silence when one sees a crime being perpetrated and does not report the crime to the police or the authorities. Now this kind of silence is a would be killer. It makes one think. soapy |
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Re: Silent
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by Poetic_Punk on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 07:55:10 AM AEST
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| good stuff shelbs, keep on writing, we'll keep reading |
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Re: Silent
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 10:40:05 AM AEST
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Silence has to be some of the wost to deal with. I agree. Great piece Shelby.
Deadwriter
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