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Set me free

Contributed by SavannahMariee on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 07:17:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The rain is cold
But I'm not afraid
Because it hides the tears
that you have made

My body starts to shiver
My hands start shaking
When you told me you loved me
I should of known you were faking

I left it all up to you
I should've known that was wrong
Because now that your gone
it's like the ending of a song

He was my everything
who's going to catch me when I fall
and now he's nothing
nothing at all

The rain keeps coming harder and harder
and the tears keep streaming
but no one can hear or see
the inside of me screaming

I close my eyes
and I count to three
as I hold up the medal rod
my soul gets set free.

Copyright © SavannahMariee ... [ 2008-04-27 07:17:53]
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Re: Set me free (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Sunday, 4th July 2010 @ 11:26:48 AM AEST
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Wow i must say it's a very emotional write. But i do feel you're grief as well. This also reminds me of when I broke someone's heart when I really thought we were meant to be. I still can't stand the guilt. Hope you have better days,
Deidra

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