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The Journey
Contributed by
urizen
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Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 06:09:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Force Fed,
I put myself on a drip;
I see my walls come tumbling down.
I stand here not moving; a statue rooted into the ground.
A whip across my back and I have no idea
A window to my soul,
My footsteps stained by tears.
You seem to know the difference between right and wrong,
I see the future, I see the past,
I see them both rolled into one.
You dream and seem to be a danger,
A figure of the fates,
Some laughter comes and then departs:
I don't see love I just see hate.
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urizen
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Re: The Journey
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:33:57 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this. Great use of imagery and colours. Great write. |
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Re: The Journey
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by ferasdour on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:47:20 AM AEST
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i liek.
;_;
thereto, i can relate to the last to stanzas |
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Re: The Journey
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 08:57:20 AM AEST
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This is a very very lovely write, fantastic actually,
the second verse is just fabulous and i was enthralled by the lines and involved in the short piece, very well done!! |
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Re: The Journey
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 06:54:40 AM AEST
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Good dark writing.
-Phil |
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