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Bones.
Contributed by
jerrykantrell
on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 12:53:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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My dreams washed away,
even the vultures have gone !
Bleached whiteness remains.
Copyright ©
jerrykantrell
... [
2008-04-27 00:53:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Bones.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 03:13:45 AM AEST (User
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Good imagery...well done
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Re: Bones.
(User Rating: 1 ) by safetyinnumbers on
Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:36:11 PM AEST (User
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Hi, nice poem, I can really relate to it in my life. Good work. |
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Re: Bones.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lee on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 06:48:03 AM AEST (User
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good overall.
good stuff |
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