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I loved the way you loved me.......
Contributed by
ravisada
on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 06:23:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It was a mid night and I woke you from your sleep
I held you tight in my arms while you murmur.
I soaked my love with your lips and opened your
heart for my love to get into your soul.
I felt in my mind whether or not I should be allowed
but your heat made me to understand that you are ready
You cared me with your love which I never felt before
You were like a princess stood with your passionate love
I was set free to have your love however I wanted
When I heard your beautiful words, my heart kept beat hard
I let go all my love on you that I had stored for you
My secret of love had written in your heart with my pen
I loved you the way you loved me with much understanding
No matter what wonders my love have seen you
But these memories will never leave me.
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2008 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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2008-04-26 18:23:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I loved the way you loved me.......
(User Rating: 1 ) by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:35:49 AM AEST (User
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I really felt your messge here. Although as personal as it is i feel your not alone in what you feel. |
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Re: I loved the way you loved me.......
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 03:27:39 PM AEST (User
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This is incredible a breath of fresh air. Lovely work.
Michelle |
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Re: I loved the way you loved me.......
(User Rating: 1 ) by vampyrekiss on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 04:50:49 AM AEST (User
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this is beautiful a true showing of love great write |
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