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The Weeping Skies
Contributed by
Vic
on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 02:06:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Someone cried for me today,
With howling winds and roars and lights,
This natural splendor took my breath away,
Guess someone was grieving for me from the heights.
I saw trees bend to touch the ground,
Whispering softly, comforting words of concern.
With raindrops falling all around,
The rhythms displaying an act of discern.
I was thrilled to witness this act of love,
Overwhelmed with joy, I was sad.
Even the consoling showers from heaven above,
Fail to get my love to make me glad.
Where are you my love, where are you now?
My heart longs for you in this time of despair.
Guess I will live with ole memories somehow,
One day you’ll have tears but I won’t be there.
Copyright ©
Vic
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2008-04-25 14:06:03]
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Re: The Weeping Skies
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:10:40 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Weeping Skies
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 05:55:48 AM AEST
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| Good visuals....enjoyable read... Jenni |
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Re: The Weeping Skies
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 09:15:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, I am unable to come up with just the right words. I really did feel this write on many scales.
Michelle |
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Re: The Weeping Skies
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by Sasha on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 09:13:23 AM AEST
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| so much of pain, or is this another beautiful write? hope you are in a good place now.. |
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Re: The Weeping Skies
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by jesusofholland on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:47:33 AM AEST
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| Vic my man, who is this woman who hurt you so? When we lose the one thing that gives meaning to our lives it is hard to find joy or comfort in anything. Thank goodness for us we can release some of these emotions when we join nib and sheet. Very nice write! |
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