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It was a complete surprise to me
Contributed by
holy
on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 01:07:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It was a complete surprise to me
Since I knew you that day
I never cried once again
I didn't know when our world came into being
I didn't even understand what you were feeling
I had hoped that we should often meet
as long as you wouldn't be upset
That day I met you on the way
you told me we can meet every sunday
how nice
you gave me such a surprise
as if a deer in me I was getting restless
and the night I had wonderful dreams
You went aways just I came
I saw the aritcle you corrected for me you left
What a surprise
I was deeply grateful to you for your bounteous gifts
because that time you were very busy
I had told you don't be in a hurry
the day was my birthday
your presence was very great
you could imagine how happy I was
to me it was a complete surprise
I knew the road which blocked with snow
I bet you won't come because you had to walk very slowly
When I fear that I will make mistake
your words always made me comfortable
I told you I was very poor in many things
your smile always made me promiseful
you are a handsome man without fear
you are a great favourite in the big big world
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holy
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2008-04-25 13:07:35]
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Re: It was a complete surprise to me
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by holy on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 04:56:08 PM AEST
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you told me we can meet every sunday
you told me we could meet every sunday |
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Re: It was a complete surprise to me
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by holy on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:03:01 PM AEST
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I had told you don't be in a hurry
I had told you not had to do it in a hurry |
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Re: It was a complete surprise to me
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by holy on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:10:56 PM AEST
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I had told you don't be in a hurry
I had told you not to do it in a hurry |
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