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Undying love

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:24:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You're the pain i cant erase, the reoccuring nightmare relived every night.
The half that completes me, the blood flowing in my veins; the fire that burns apart everything inside of me.
The best thing that's happened to me, yet the worst.
Youre hope and wishes, inspiration, and my desire, my faith, and my true love.
I could express my love for you in words, but it would never match up to te real emotions i concur each day.
I could hate everything about you, but just one simple "hello" and im back to square one.
The anger you cause me to feel towards you, the feeling of never being happy.
People can tell me to give up and let go, but it wont happen, youre the only real thing i know.
Youre the disaster i cant overcome, the light in my world.
You make my mind flip upside-down, but with every tear and rip you cause i pull through it.
Hoping, wishing, praying one day, out of the ordinary, youll confess your love for me.
That the puzzle will finally mend together piece by piece.

Copyright © poetrygirl1991 ... [ 2008-04-25 05:24:09]
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Re: Undying love (User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 05:01:52 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. Great write of pining and reciprocated love. I truly felt this one. Well done.

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