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Lost Friends
Contributed by
Aleph
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Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 03:45:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where did it all go wrong
Once long ago
There were forts in the snow
Castles in the sand
I even once held your hand
Then they came
All around like ghosts of sound
Whispers of misdeeds
Hurtful words and angry tears
Division and strife
How could friends chose sides
Words were heard
But our hearts stopped listening
When friendships die
Silence is the only sound left
Copyright ©
Aleph
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2008-04-25 03:45:13]
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Re: Lost Friends
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by Lenny_Gazbowski on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 04:48:41 AM AEST
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| well written poem which I empathised with. |
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Re: Lost Friends
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:38:35 AM AEST
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| It's very too the point, and i think thats what i like about it. Like, its in depth..i know exactly what you mean. it's tough, and i myself sometimes question,where and why some of my friendships actually ended. Very good write. |
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