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I Should Tell You
Contributed by
breezyweezy
on
Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 10:55:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i've been wanting to tell you something for a long time
and it's eating at me inside
there have been so many chances
and so many times i've tried
what i wish to tell you, might surprise you
in many more ways than one
i feel that secret is on my shoulders
and it weighs over a ton
i've given so many hints to you
and i thought you would know
but i guess hints aren't enough
because you don't understand everything i throw
i want to tell you straight forward
but i wouldn't know what to say
but i should tell you what this something is
so my insides won't be knawed away
Copyright ©
breezyweezy
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2008-04-24 22:55:23]
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Re: I Should Tell You
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by Poetic_Punk on
Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 10:58:42 PM AEST
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| Good poem. conveys the feeling well, keep it up |
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Re: I Should Tell You
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 01:27:21 AM AEST
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Good piece....I'll pass on the advice I was given.... Tell that someone...don't let it knaw away at you....
Jenni |
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Re: I Should Tell You
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:47:34 AM AEST
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| good write. not too many people can tackle the rhyme scheme. =) And yes, it is naturally better to tell someone how you feel, there's always a possibility of getting hurt because of it but its better to get things like that off of your chest. |
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Re: I Should Tell You
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:47:39 AM AEST
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| good write. not too many people can tackle the rhyme scheme. =) And yes, it is naturally better to tell someone how you feel, there's always a possibility of getting hurt because of it but its better to get things like that off of your chest. |
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