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Textile Girl
Contributed by
Amoeba
on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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At first a solitary stitch is torn,
The shining material needle reborn.
A patch-work quilt that's almost broken,
Our fraying love, literally unspoken.
We fooled each other with weak white thread,
Our material stained with wild-cherry red.
Stained with embarrassment, marked with guilt,
Pulling apart this life we have built.
By stitching myself to material you,
With second-hand thread and non-stick glue,
We've devalued our quilt, its started to fray,
We tear our material by walking away.
Put a hammer in our sowing machine,
Leave us wondering what might have been.
Copyright ©
Amoeba
... [
2003-03-13 00:00:00]
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Re: Textile Girl
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by zeroelysium on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 01:09:16 AM AEST
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| strangely i related with this .. odd what unexpected words will do .. overall 4 of 5 elvis like thusts would have gotten 5 but i didnt like whom it made me htink of;) good poem though |
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Re: Textile Girl
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by FLTulip on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 07:17:36 AM AEST
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| I like this comparison. Very nice poem |
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