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wait

Contributed by holy on Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 12:32:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wait

Snow is a usual sight in our place for winter
it is also the coldest season in a year
we can watch the woods filled up with snow
those days were snowy
and the snows were very heavy

You went out to visit the friends you had to visit
it started snow after several days
that was the time before the New year
unexpectedly the snows were getting heavier and heavier
I wished you came back soon with some worry

When you phoned me everything was going regularly
I expected you would back earlier and safely
When you told me there was no train running normally
I was worried about your safety
When I saw you coming back sately
all my fears went away

Do you know
when I heard things are going better
I was glad to hear that
Do you know
When I knew the snows gave you some troubles
I hoped you can reture as early as possible
Do you know
When your voice was in my ears
I couldn't wait to give you my warm kiss

I don't like this long long wait
I don't hope we are always apart
but life is always have to have new wait
I must used to it and have to wait and wait
we often say distance will create beauty
I believe it but I still hope can with you together all the day

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-04-24 12:32:08]
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Re: wait (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 12:55:08 PM AEST
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This is really touching... I liked it.. Jenni

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