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what happening to me....

Contributed by crazy on Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 09:53:20 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



whats happening to me
my world is crashing all around
complete discust with my reality
why is it now when everything is so great
its trying to break me
i cant look into the darkness

whats happening to me
as i sit up at night wondering where she is
is she dead or did she kill someone
knowledge unknown to me

whats happening to me
when i lose the my best friend
he just stops talking to me and acts like im not here
what have i done

whats happening to me
as i sit here writting this poem
wondering how do i keep caring
can i possibly go on

whats happening to me
when i see people not care
just throwing trash everywhere
unable to see the destuction they leave


whats happening to me
when i just close my eyes to sleep
i see a wonderful world
no wars, no hunger, no lost friendships or moms
every one will be right where they are needed

whats happening to me
i wake up and remember
im the one who carries this burden all alone
unable to show how much it bothers me

not wanting to care
but unable to bear the look in your eyes
when i have to tell you good bye....



Copyright © crazy ... [ 2008-04-24 09:53:20]
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Re: what happening to me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 11:13:59 AM AEST
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Very strong, emotional piece. Do not be over burdened carring the load that you can not or should not carry. If you need a sounding board, shoot me a message.


Deadwriter




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