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my life that has become
Contributed by
anonymous1212
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Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 04:08:09 AM in AEST
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its all that i wish would never be
its fights i pray i hadnt seen
its a tear that i desperatly want to mean more
its her face through it all, as im held against the wall
its the hardships im forced to endure
its myself turning numb
its another hearts battle shes won
its a love continually slipping
its my own self esteem being crushed so it seems
its my mother when i do something wrong
its my wants turned to blurs
its whatever others perferr
its the realization that i mean nothing
its me lying in bed, pillow over my head
its wanting for life just to end
its me losing my grip
its everyone around beginning to slip
its myself
its my family
its the people who cant stand me
its now normal
its empty
its knowing all who resent me
its me starting to feel the same way
its confusion
its life battle i just may be losing
its everything that i wish i could change....
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Re: my life that has become
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 05:02:45 AM AEST
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1212, I feel the way you state, and I think there are much more out there that feel this way.
it's like two steps behind from what i want to do and change, seeing, the most part it isn't really me, it's everything, and I'm apart of that.
You see, I believe in the people who talk bad about me. but, for most part that is just because bad plublicity is still there in someones head. If i can ***** them off enough to change, cool, if I say enough to make them smile, neat, if they don't want to hear or see well that's fine i'm still me.
I think this is a kick *** write. You say alot of things that make sense. |
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Re: my life that has become
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by crazy on
Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 09:39:21 AM AEST
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this is such a true expresion of how many of us feel. right now in my life my world is falling apart and your poem makes so much sense its scary. your writting i struthful and absolutly wonderful. great job.
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Re: my life that has become
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by anonymous1212 on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 06:38:03 AM AEST
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thanks to both of you.
Rhie76, although i am deeply sorry of what you are going through you sharing that you are enduring similar feelings as i am makes me feel slightly less alone...i wish the best for you
and appreciate your comments on this poem:] |
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