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Darkness B’falls
Contributed by
Amorita
on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2008 @ 08:15:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Gliding deep into the forest
Darkness covers me like a blanket
And the mist surrounding me
I feel like theres no way to flee
I look beyond the board horizon
See the moon shine over the black sea
Like the oceans filled with sadness
I run, stumble and try to break free
The path encloses and I’m shattered
Tears of rain encumbers me
Darkness embraces me like a child
Now I wait for him to let me be
Copyright ©
Amorita
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2008-04-23 08:15:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Darkness B’falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 12:53:23 PM AEST (User
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Incredible write here. Nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: Darkness B’falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:41:09 AM AEST (User
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Brilliant. Brilliant use of words.
Just brilliant i guess. |
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