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Exploding Rage
Contributed by
alibof10
on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2008 @ 03:28:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Anger runs through my veins
I'm just trying to stop the rains
Rains of anger coming down
Thundering towards the ground
So fed up from the ***** I get
All they say is forget
But it’s all kept inside
Saved deep in my darkest side
One day it’s going to explode
Because I'm going to over upload
I won't take it anymore
I will smack the door
Even if I try to stop myself
I will fail, there’s not what if
I will explode
All the rage makes it cold
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alibof10
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2008-04-23 03:28:03]
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Re: Exploding Rage
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lenny_Gazbowski on
Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 12:41:43 AM AEST
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| nicely timed rythm. angry. yes! |
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Re: Exploding Rage
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:42:40 AM AEST
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| I feel the beat of this poem aswell as the intensity. Superb |
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