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~Another Empty Page~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 09:59:14 AM in AEST
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~~*~~
Another empty page
Stares me in the face.
My words all seem to retreat
Into a secret place.
No matter how hard I try
I can't seem to find
The right words to express
What is on my mind.
Another uncertain day,
Awaits me in the morrow.
Will it be a day of happiness?
Or one filled with sorrow?
Will there be more happy songs
Left for me to sing?
What lies in store for me?
What will the future bring?
Another broken spirit
Joins the club tonight.
Another lonely soul
Wanting to see the light.
Another breathless moment
With nothing left to say,
but, “God give me the strength,
To face another Day”
~~*~~
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Jenni_K
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2008-04-22 09:59:14]
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 10:26:32 AM AEST
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This write is Hallmark quality it's beautifully sad and happy all in one
Awesome.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 11:16:05 AM AEST
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Very heartfelt write. Do not give up the faith. The light will shine bright.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 12:34:03 PM AEST
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you mirrored my feelings with this write.
I think you have found the words as well.
Such beauty in this write touched with uncertainty it brought a couple tears to my eyes.
May the sun rise tomorrow on your heart and bring a day full of song my sweet jen.
huggerssssss
Michelle |
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 01:52:29 PM AEST
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very beautiful!! simply amazing!!
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2008 @ 12:33:51 AM AEST
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| this is a great write. i especially loved the last 3-4 lines...i find myself feeling this same thing just about everyday.."nothing left to say, but god give me the strength to face another day" those are powerfull words. |
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by Vic on
Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 12:22:15 PM AEST
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B E A utiful..
I loved it..
love and life |
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by ConcietySpawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 09:42:15 PM AEST
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| very well written you have talent. keep it up |
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 12:29:11 PM AEST
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| lyrical perfection once again. extraordinary. |
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Re: ~Another Empty Page~
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by windowguy on
Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 06:15:48 AM AEST
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| A familiar feeling too often felt. Bliss when the words come flowing out! You've captured those feeling so well. |
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