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I Am Sorry
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 07:33:50 PM in AEST
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My heart is heavy
With tears that I have yet to cry
With lies that I repeatedly tell myself
I am sorry I am disappointing
I lied when I say I am all right
I just did not know how to deal
When I realized I never did let go
I felt the tears on my cheeks
As my thoughts turn onto you
I know I am just a big disappointment
To you and to myself
And to our friendship
I am sorry I lied to you
I am sorry I cried about you
I am sorry I love you
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2008-04-21 19:33:50]
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Re: I Am Sorry
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by Spike on
Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 10:36:57 PM AEST
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Its such a drag when you fall for a friend who doesn't reciprocate the feeling, and you captured the disappointment, angst and self pity like someone who's experienced it. Ouch.
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Re: I Am Sorry
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by whome on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 01:01:52 AM AEST
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The emotion, self doubt and self pity came through so strongly in this poem. When a friendship developes into love I think there is a deeper pain and hurt when it fails and you showed it all.
A very good poem, and well written. |
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