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Hold Me Tight
Contributed by
honey56
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Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hold me tight don't let
Me go
Over the hills and water
Runs
I'd swim the deepest ocean
For you
Hold me tight don't let
Me go
For our love is so very rare
~~Smile~~
That is why I'd walk hills
And mountains high
For you to hold me tight and
Don't let go
As we dance amidst the stars
In limbo we stay
So hold me tight don't let me
Go
For our love will be as a gem
Beautiful and rare
Amidst the planets of stars
Copyright ©
honey56
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2008-04-20 22:45:00]
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Re: Hold Me Tight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 11:11:48 PM AEST
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Oh honey, what a lovely, LOVELY piece. So gorgeous in all
it's affirmation. The ending stanza was especially wonderful.
Beautiful, hun. Just beautiful!
~Breezy |
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Re: Hold Me Tight
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 03:26:37 AM AEST
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| A beautiful plea..... well rendered... Jenni |
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Re: Hold Me Tight
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 03:32:55 PM AEST
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Simple yet a master's stroke. beautifully written my friend;specially those last line verses are outstanding.
Thank so for sharing.
with lots of love and respect
FRANCO |
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Re: Hold Me Tight
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:18:57 AM AEST
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| This is very nice |
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