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everything we share
Contributed by
holy
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Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 09:09:22 AM in AEST
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everything we share
You traveled abroad often
and always brought present for our family
I remember you brought home something different
that is a nice dog very friendly
For some reason I liked it right away
It became a forvourite thing of me
wherever I went it always followed me
I never forget that wonderful story about it you told me
When you are far away from me
it is easy to take care for me
One day you were quiet
I could see that you are upset
I thought maybe something special was making you sad
but I know your temper and didn't want to make your mood more bad
I stopped what I wanted to say
Your mood got worse after the day
you still didn't tell me what happened
I knew I should help you to take the sorrow away
I wrote a note and put it circled the dog's neck
then pointed the dog show before your eyes
How nice the lovely dog
I saw your smile I saw your smile
You told me you had to leave your job
because you wanted to have more free time of yourself
But you was very worried if the new job will be found too difficult
several years went by
I still remember it was a very cold and rainy night
although the ice wind was strong blowing our face
we talked and talked and gave sympathy to each other through the whole night
our hearts grew closer and closer and you told me you felt very nice
Everything we share in our life
anything belong to us don't need to hide
I would like to do anything for you and I will do my best
To be with you together I like
I like spending with you all the time
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Re: everything we share
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by holy on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 06:27:27 PM AEST
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that is a nice dog very friendly
that was a nice dog very friendly |
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Re: everything we share
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by holy on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 06:28:54 PM AEST
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When you are far away from me
it is easy to take care for me
when you were far away from me
it was easy to take care for me |
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Re: everything we share
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Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 06:30:21 PM AEST
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then pointed the dog show before your eyes
then pointed the dog to show in front of your eyes |
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Re: everything we share
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by holy on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 06:31:26 PM AEST
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I could see that you are upset
I could see that you were upset |
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Re: everything we share
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by holy on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 06:32:40 PM AEST
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but I know your temper and didn't want to make your mood more bad
but I knew your temper and didn't want to make your mood more bad |
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Re: everything we share
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Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 06:34:21 PM AEST
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But you was very worried if the new job will be found too difficult
but you were very worried if the new job will be found too difficult |
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Re: everything we share
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Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 06:35:41 PM AEST
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although the ice wind was strong blowing our face
although the ice winds were strong blowing out face |
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Re: everything we share
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by holy on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 06:36:25 PM AEST
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although the ice wind was strong blowing our face
although the ice winds were strong blowing our face |
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