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Water Lilies and Dreams
Contributed by
breathofrane
on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:11:59 AM in AEST
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On the whisper of the wind
My heart doth sail to a far off land
Full of faery tales
Waking to the dew drop prism
Upon his lashes
The morning sun doth twinkle and splashes
Birds awaken, sing, and take flight
From their feathery beds against the night
The softest kiss to his lips
His smell I do breathe
A flutter of those soft lashes
The crystal eyes do flash
A raspberry rose upon his chest I brush
A smile across his face does reach
Stretching upon the meadow there in
This is how my dream did begin.
Sara E. Farmer July 18, 2000
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Re: Water Lilies and Dreams
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:15:50 AM AEST
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aww I really love this.. its kinda fantasy like and sorta shakespheren in a way.. lovely write.. sounds liek something that could be in a fairy story book ( i Love faeries)
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Water Lilies and Dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 11:02:27 AM AEST
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| Awww...such a beautiful and wispy write.... enjoyed it... Jenni |
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Re: Water Lilies and Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 09:54:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful words and imagery .. like the softest touch.
I love the airy feel of this; almost as if it transports the
reader inside the dream to view first hand what
emotions linger within sighs.
Beautiful, beautiful write. ^_^
~Breezy |
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Re: Water Lilies and Dreams
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by Karlee14 on
Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 03:24:15 PM AEST
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Intoxicating poem.
The ending especially.
Makes you feel like it takes a turn for the worst.
I deeply enjoy your style of writing.
~Karlee |
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