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Your Letter
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 12:41:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I got a piece of mail the other day,
it came from you and took my blues away.
It said you were giving a birthday bash,
I needn’t buy a present of much cash.
Birthday parties are great fun to attend,
if I wished I could bring some dearsome friend.
Ah, little need for thinking of such a one,
other girl than you for me there is none.
You’re the apple of my eye, my heart’s flame,
that burns my mind day and night I can’t tame.
It’s enough you’ll be there what else matters?
Friday night plans it completely shatters.
This letter in hand is shimmering gold,
More precious than the bowling team ten fold.
Copyright ©
ramfire
... [
2008-04-20 00:41:28]
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Re: Your Letter
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 01:06:20 AM AEST
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Awww this is so beautiful.... Hope you have a great time...
I found a couple of the rhymes a bit forced, but that's just my opinion. I did enjoy this...
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Re: Your Letter
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:00:47 AM AEST
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this was a really cheerful uplifting read.. it brought a smile to my face.. great job here I enjoyed this alot.. a very happy write =D
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Your Letter
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 08:18:38 AM AEST
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A beautiful letter and a bit romance on the make>.
Excellent write~ |
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