|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Be there.
Contributed by
jerrykantrell
on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 08:32:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
|
True love dies,
and memories fade away.
Alas, leave me be !
Copyright ©
jerrykantrell
... [
2008-04-19 20:32:07]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Be there.
(User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 11:52:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Right on the money Jerry. |
|
|
Re: Be there.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 04:03:03 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Lovely sentiments....
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Be there.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 08:20:49 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice write~~God Bless |
|
|
Re: Be there.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 10:31:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Spoken from the bottom of a dreadfully broken heart. I hear ya ..
but time has a way of changing our minds. (I thought it were not
so a time or two, but was always proven wrong).
The haiku itself, is wonderful. The sentiment is demandingly
emotive and very potent. But I'm afraid I must disagree with the
first statement. True love never dies. It expands, evolves, becomes
stronger, but it never, ever dies. (If love leaves us, then it wasn't true, yeah?)
All in all, EXTREMELY thought provoking! Very hard to do with
a haiku! Well done, poet!
~Breezy
|
|
|
Re: Be there.
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 01:50:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very pretty you did wonderful with this.
Michelle |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
