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All My Life
Contributed by
airhead
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Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 05:33:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All my life I waited
For you to come along
To be right in my heart
Where you do belong
We’ve had a rocky road
That I’ll not deny
But we rode the storms
To come out way up high
We have lots of laughs and banter
We have tears & sadness too
But that’s all what makes us
Together me & you
We have a bond, a love
Magical yet true
Without you by my side
I don’t know what I’ll do
If you leave me now
A part of me will die
Forever I will love you
Never ending tears I’ll cry
Don’t take away from me
All that makes me smile
Don’t make me unhappy & sad
Putting me through this trial
I’ll end my tale of feelings here
All of which I’m sure you know
One last thing I’ll say to you
Please don’t let me go
Copyright ©
airhead
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2008-04-19 17:33:53]
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Re: All My Life
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 03:36:24 AM AEST
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Ahhh..really loved the flow in this... Nicely done...
Jenni |
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Re: All My Life
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:02:24 AM AEST
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this is very well expressed and i love the ending.. this is very well written.. Loved the flow..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: All My Life
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 11:10:04 PM AEST
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A very sweet and contented write with a proclamation of
love that drives the heart so deeply. A deepness that
we all look for and long to hold onto.
An affectingly provocative and beautiful piece ~
~Breezy |
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