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Premonition
Contributed by
Lisa_Fisher
on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Bright light visiting me in my dream
a flash of stars chasing me.
A vision that burns my eyes
as the shapes materialize.
The light still burns in my mind
burning bright, vision set to rewind,
in flashing light.
In my eyes im losing sight, just pictures
burning inside so bright, flashing light
in my vision a visit of my premonition
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Lisa_Fisher
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2003-03-12 19:20:00]
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Re: Premonition
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 11:05:14 PM AEST
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I like this vision very clear!
Great little peice! Christina |
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Re: Premonition
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by Amoeba on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 06:02:12 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this poem. I am squinting as I read it! Well done! |
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