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~Apparition~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 10:23:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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He appeared in the winter of my years,
As gently as a summer breeze.
His voice was music to my ears,
I listened to him with such ease.
Our meeting was purely by chance,
We hit it off right away.
I knew I wanted him at first glance,
Never to be apart for a day.
His gentle fingers caressed my skin
As softly as the ocean spray.
Being with him made my head spin,
I prayed, with me, he would stay.
His kisses were as sweet as wine,
Hair as soft as silk.
His touch, it was simply divine,
Teeth, as white as milk.
His smile mesmerized me all night,
His sensual lips brought me pleasure.
About this man, I had to write,
Cause I had found me a treasure.
To lie down and sleep, I was afraid
My mind, in a state of confusion.
I closed my eye for a minute and prayed
That he was not an apparition.
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-04-19 10:23:12]
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Re: ~Apparition~
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 11:08:40 AM AEST
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I like it, I like it
Hubba Hubba
nice soft write |
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Re: ~Apparition~
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 12:46:45 PM AEST
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A magically beautifull write.
Awesome.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~Apparition~
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 02:31:10 PM AEST
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whewwww weee girl got it steaming now. I loved this made me smile . I agree with Shari hubba hubba lol
Hugs
Michelle
(not to mention as always written with the touch of class and poetic talent as you always do so glad you are back smokin up the screen chicklet!) |
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Re: ~Apparition~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:20:12 AM AEST
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this is just marvelous!! awesome flow to it.. great job on this..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~Apparition~
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 08:30:06 AM AEST
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So beautiful ~Sweet~Excellent write
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Re: ~Apparition~
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 11:36:05 AM AEST
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I like this very much.
Deadwriter
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