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I LOVE YOU TOO
Contributed by
xxILoveTheSilencexx
on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 09:23:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You wrote me this note,
inside it said just three words,
"I LOVE YOU"
Fear rushed through me,
I loved you to,
But I didn't know how to tell you.
the words rang in my head.
"I LOVE YOU"
One day you asked me,
"Do you love me?"
I found the courage from the bottom of my heart.
"Yes" I said
"I LOVE YOU"
you said.
I couldn't reply,
I didn't know how.
You stared deep in my eyes.
I couldn't say anything.
You just laughed.
Through the months that passed
you told me time again,
"I LOVE YOU"
I could never reply right.
I didn't know how to express what I felt.
"I LOVE YOU"
you said one night.
when I didn't reply,
you put your head close to mine.
I looked up into your big green eyes,
You knew how to say it,
when your lips found mine.
"I WILL LOVE YOU TILL THE DAY I DIE"
It came sooner than expected.
The doctor said it was your heart,
it wasn't working right.
"it will be alright" you told me one night.
"I WILL LOVE YOU AFTER I DIE"
You told me.
I couldn't say anything.
At the funeral I looked upon your face,
stony and cold,
The person that I'd loved but never quite told.
I picked up your clammy hand to hold it,
And found inside it a note.
On it was my name,
It said just three words.
"I LOVE YOU"
I could feel the tears stream down my face.
Feel the makeup smearing,
I didn't care.
I found a pen and quickly wrote a note,
and placed it in your hand.
I knew even though you were gone you could read the words.
"I LOVE YOU TOO"
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xxILoveTheSilencexx
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2008-04-19 09:23:53]
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Re: I LOVE YOU TOO
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 09:34:46 AM AEST
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| Deep and touching....Love shouldn't be so hard to declare.... but that was a lovely gesture..., Jenni |
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Re: I LOVE YOU TOO
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 10:04:41 AM AEST
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Trying desperately to comment on this piece but finding it difficult to find the right words through the tears.
Beautiful & touching!
Peace to you my friend,
~Shannon |
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