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So you say?
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 02:05:59 PM in AEST
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Deal your hand upfront and personal.
Shining smiles and smug remarks.
Deal it out but will not take it
look around you petty show off
not really thankful for what you got.
Instead of the judgement
put yourself in another's shoes.
If per chance you walked a mile
I have no doubt you would lose.
Not wishing it on anyone
though how Id smile if you got a clue, for just a moment.
So blow fumes acting like a spoiled witch.
Two faced lame and hateful *****.
Baby act is what I see..
Think twice more before....
crossing me.
So you say? Sorry I didn't hear it right.
Oh slap my face I forget
you don't play the hand just right.
Play a game if you please
buck it up your not fooling me
I read right through your transparent self
shut it up put it on a shelf
I dont care to hear it!
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-04-18 14:05:59]
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Re: So you say?
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 05:06:49 PM AEST
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You go girlfriend and I'll stand beside you and pat my foot'
Awesome write.
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Re: So you say?
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:14:20 PM AEST
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| You gonna take out your club also?? Get it all out, grrlfriend... sometimes we need to.... Jenni |
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Re: So you say?
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST
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Shelby,
Great piece. Remind me to stay on your good side. I hope the message gets to the person it is intended for.
Deadwriter
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Re: So you say?
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:51:58 PM AEST
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Give em hell! I like this one much.
Your second stanza reminds me of the poem I submitted a short time back entitled "Walk that mile."
If this is by anyway a spin-off, I am truly flattered.
Again, you've shared an excellent write. Definitely a 5-Star write.
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Re: So you say?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 10:56:37 PM AEST
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Wow chickie!! This was H E A V Y !!!
You've said so much of what I've felt in the past months. I really detest
the double talk some people dish out. Stating one thing, and doing the
exact opposite. Damn. If everyone who sat in judgment were judged
themselves, we'd have a lot more humility in this world!
Cowards. Two-faced cowards! Just the thought stirs up the acid
does it not?
Great write hun! I miss this place. Will be back Sunday when
I have more time. ^_^
*huge hugs!!*
~Breezy
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Re: So you say?
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 06:37:27 AM AEST
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| nice rant |
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