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Blur
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 08:57:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Falling faster and faster through the fingertips of time
Time still ticking by
Passing past people I thought I knew
Flying faster and faster through the fragments of yesterday’s memories
I am a blur
It is all I am and all I am meant to be
I am barely seen
It’s all I’ve ever been
Slipping in slow-motion past scenes that seem familiar
Familiarities still fading
Passing past people that never knew me
Stretching out to stay in a single scene of yesterday’s memories
I am a stranger
It is all I am and all I am meant to be
I am barely seen
It’s all I’ve ever been
It’s all I’ll ever be
Copyright ©
eeeitak
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2008-04-18 08:57:21]
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Re: Blur
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:56:23 AM AEST
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Re: Blur
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 10:21:16 AM AEST
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| It doesn't have to be!! You can change it if you want to badly enough....Jenni |
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Re: Blur
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by jantra on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 06:47:50 PM AEST
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| this was pretty good! my only gripe is that "passing past people" is redundant. simply saying "passing people that never knew me" is much better. keep it up i look forward to more from you! |
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Re: Blur
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:42:51 PM AEST
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This, gets this . . . " Masterpeice " simple as
that, not only can i relate to this but it's to
sadly familiar, like it could have been writtien
about my life . . . Beautifuly crafted and most
enjoyable to read again and again, perhaps
also dwell awhile . . .
take care . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: Blur
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 02:22:10 PM AEST
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ahhh
I feel ya on this flow.... |
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