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My Last Three Words
Contributed by
alibof10
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Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 03:50:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Looking up at the starless dark sky
On the streets wondering why
Why my love still haven’t replied
Is everything OK as I wish it to be?
Hope it is or I will wish I would’ve died
If only I could just see
The one whose with I want to be
God, how much I'm ready to give
To able to really live
Be with the girl who owns my heart
Always and forever, till eternity
Live together and other people we pity
Because no one shares like our love, its lovely
I love you, it’s what I want to say at my life’s finale
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2008-04-18 03:50:12]
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Re: My Last Three Words
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by althea_kendry on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 05:17:46 AM AEST
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good job :-) i agree that they are the last three words anyone would want to say
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Re: My Last Three Words
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by eeeitak on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 08:17:48 AM AEST
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| this is so touching! its beautiful, well done :] |
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