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Walking Alone
Contributed by
breezyweezy
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Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:26:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Walking down the lonely road
where no one really cares
they always laugh and ridicule you
and no one even dares
to try and stop the madness
in which has gone too on for too long
and for the people who start the madness
you should know that you're all wrong
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breezyweezy
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2008-04-17 10:26:41]
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Re: Walking Alone
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by Saaaraxxx16 on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:56:29 AM AEST
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| Hi. sry about posting this... but im on right now so can you set up the chat thingy? |
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Re: Walking Alone
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:35:01 AM AEST
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Touching write....nicely done...
If this were my poem, I would remove the word "in" from the 6th line tho....
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Re: Walking Alone
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 11:15:07 AM AEST
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Wow, Great write. I can see it fitting so many people and their situations. I always tell people they don't have to like me, but if they don't, just leave me alone.
Deadwriter
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