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random lyric.
Contributed by
Saaaraxxx16
on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:07:31 AM in AEST
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Staring down a tear falling down
should i hide it from your face
i dont know what i should do
its all coming out of place
i guess i could watch the stars go by
what good would that do
i find forever looking
for something true
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2008-04-17 10:07:31]
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Re: random lyric.
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by breezyweezy on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:11:55 AM AEST
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| wow dude.... thats deep.... and u wrote that in like 2 seconds |
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Re: random lyric.
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by breezyweezy on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:32:49 AM AEST
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ok, srry im commenting again but i have some advice
make the last line longer like wen it says "for something true" make it like "for something that is true" it kinda flows better, but overall, it's good |
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